Please don't use lined paper -_-

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Myspacebarisnotbrokenyouknow,itjustdoesn'tworkpropperly.

please dont look if ye dont like lined paper >:[

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Is a man not entitled to the sweat of his brow?

First; How can I know whether there are lines in the image if I don't look at it?
Second; I'm not picking a fight you know?
Third; Don't take comments on your work personally, as they aren't about you. You could easily feed a troll by doing so. Just a warning.

As for the comment:
Just think about your creations before submitting. I always ask myself questions about by work so I'm well off to creating great or at least nice stuff. I ask things like:
- How does what I want to add to the image I want to submit improve that very image?
- What does it improve about the image? (Message, Theme, Style etc.)
- Is the image better off without what I want to add?

And several other questions arise as well. Now as for the lines, if you answer the questions just asked, what does that say about your image?

Again, I'm not picking a fight. I'm just shedding a new light on your work, hoping you take something onto account to make finer work.

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Myspacebarisnotbrokenyouknow,itjustdoesn'tworkpropperly.

wow...it looks nothing like me o.o....or my house.

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I regarded the world as such a sad sight
Until I viewed it in black and white
Then I reviewed every frame and basic shape
And sealed the exits with caution tape

..........slow down, home slice. what the heck? alright, i retract my statement. what i meant to say was, "if you do not like the picture, pretend you never saw it". is that better? er, no, it sounded mean..... well, anyways....
as you can plainly see, im not a professional artist. im not really very good yet. so as much as i appreciate your detailed and insughtful comments, its just wasted on me. i didnt draw this to win the Best Streaker Of The Year Award. its just a present for my friend, who i know appriciates it, lines or no lines. its not that i didnt put thought into the picture. its just not seriously serious. there neednt be any light shed. its just.... a little present. you can complain about lines if theyre on a picture i draw for you, deal?

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Is a man not entitled to the sweat of his brow?

BE GRATEFUL I EVEN DEEM YOU WORTHY OF MY ART. well, this is what it should look like.

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Is a man not entitled to the sweat of his brow?

pffffffffffffffffffffftNO

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I regarded the world as such a sad sight
Until I viewed it in black and white
Then I reviewed every frame and basic shape
And sealed the exits with caution tape

Deal

I think it's great you drew this as a present. I've never done anything like that before. Great!
I didn't know the purpose and maybe I should have read the artists comment more thoroughly

To bad you consider my comments wasted on you. I mean, anyone who is creative enough has the ability to grow into a truly good artist. Just give it some though k?

Good luck with further presents and artwork,
FHB

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Myspacebarisnotbrokenyouknow,itjustdoesn'tworkpropperly.

no need to hide your true funky self, marycarebeary. we understand.

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Is a man not entitled to the sweat of his brow?